Week 4 Reflection: RISE Peer Feedback


I quickly related to your story Denisse as it is similar to my own. Like you, I ended up working in marketing for some time, without having a degree. And I similarly found myself feeling as if something was – or would be – missing from my career with out it. As I listened to your story, I found myself asking some of the same questions as you did along your journey like, “what will I need to really get ahead as I move further along in my career?” As I looked at your visuals, I got the sense that you are very career focused, was that the main take away that you want the audience to have when viewing your story? I think that you are very driven, passionate, and clever. I’d love to see more of that come through in your story because I feel like it is a big piece that will help draw the audience in that is missing right now. By showing them your passion and drive you may be able to make a deeper emotional connection with the audience, which will help them resonate with your story even more.